Hi Phil,
Thank you for your e-mail. Your comment is hard
and unfair. I know I won't sell you, but please
let me explain something...
It is impossible to write to please everyone. I
write to please the *core of my target market*
(or in mathematical terms, the 95% who fit into
the two standard deviations on either side of
the mean on a bell curve). This is one of the
most important lessons contained in Make Your
Site SELL!.
You obviously are of above-average intelligence,
an info-only-and-skip-the-hype type of person,
and someone who *does not like a benefit-
oriented, hard-sell presentation*. If I was to
write the site for your personality type, I
would succeed in convincing *you* that Make Your
Site SELL! lives up to its title.
But I would lose the 95% who need to understand
benefits...people who respond to a sales-
oriented process. Everyone is in a hurry on the
Web. Be too subtle or technical, and you simply
won't sell.
The proof is in the pudding. Our site's
conversion rate (sales divided by unique
visitors) is over 5%. One Web marketing guru
has already called our site, "by far, the most
persuasive selling site on the Web."
Yes, the site does take a strong *active sell*
approach. This does not mean that MYSS! is a bad
product. Actually, the feedback to MYSS! is more
than strong -- it's far better than even I could
have hoped. People will succeed on the Web
because of MYSS!, and that's a tremendous
feeling.
Yes, it's possible to use the same techniques to
fool people into buying junk. We actually
discuss that in the book, *and* why it's a
disaster to do so. But it's also possible to use
strong and effective sales techniques *to sell
great products, too.*
Interestingly, yours is the first letter to
complain about the site's approach. And we have
already had thousands of visitors, and hundreds
of sales since our end-of-March launch (and
this, despite the fact that we have not yet
launched our affiliate program or rolled out the
major steps of our marketing program).
I've got to believe that this kind of
complaint/sales ratio justifies our approach.
(But just in case, we'll also be testing two
other sites, each with its own domain and a
completely different approach. This is another
important point of Make Your Site SELL! -- test,
test, test.)
You obviously don't like a sales pitch. Neither
do I, actually. But I have learned that when I
write "beyond my own personal comfort zone," we
multiply sales. And that's a key point -- I'm
not writing to please myself -- I write to sell.
For example...
We are currently designing a high-end Web site
that is aimed at a very sophisticated, info-
oriented target market -- actually these people
are the titans of the business and investing
world. That site will be written in a completely
different tone. Which leads me to repeat what I
said at the beginning of this letter...
>***You must target *everything* about your site
to your target >market core. Forget the rest.***
The idea is to sell, not please everyone. I
remain convinced that our site accomplishes that
in spades. Just in case, however, we'll test
other approaches.
I hope this letter helps you in your Web efforts
-- I wrote it only in that spirit. I sincerely
hope you succeed on the Web! :-)
All the best,
Ken Evoy, M.D.